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The Highwayman

“I hope that ghastly, stupid highway man doesn’t come back, I’m surprised they haven’t caught him yet, I hope they string him up when they do” muttered Tim the ostler to himself. Just then the highwayman came clashing over the cobbles. “Oh no not that interfering, black hearted, evil highwayman” Tim said fiercely to himself.” “Hello anybody home?” shouted the highwayman up to his love. Nobody answered so he decided to whistle a long lost tune.
“Yes” Bess the black eyed daughter finally answered.
“Just one kiss my love”
“Ok just one” Bess shouted back.

11 Responses to “The Highwayman”

  1. Well done Tom! I like how you got Tim to describe the Highwayman, also I like the ending!

  2. I love how you put tim saying about the highwayman.

  3. I love how you used ghastly it was a really good opening thomas!!! 🙂

  4. I like ‘that black hearted, evil highwayman’, I might use that in my writing. I like it when Tim describes the highwayman. Well done.

  5. I like the way you used speach.

  6. O:-) :-$ :-! B-)

  7. You really tried hard keep it up

  8. I like it keep it up well done

  9. this is a great piece of work Thomas! I will magpie some of this!

  10. That is a very interesting piece of work, I love it, maybe next time you could put some more adverbs.

  11. I liked how you got tim’s description of the highway man in !

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