The Tigers' Blog

The highwayman

The Highwayman came galloping at a super sonic speed up to the old in door that was slowly rotting away. ‘Bess I’ve come for you.’shouted the Highwayman up at the top window.she slowly walked up to the casement fiddling with her hair.The highway man was stunned she looked more beautiful than ever.She had jet black hair.

10 Responses to “The highwayman”

  1. Well done! You’ve missed one capital letter! Apart from that I really like it!

  2. I love opening reecelydd keep the good work up.

  3. Woops missed out the your between love and opening!

  4. I love the way that you used super sonic in your work it was brilliant!!! 🙂

  5. I love the phrase she slowly walked up to the casement fiddling with her hair. Keep it up Reece!

  6. A really good piece of work brilliant.

  7. this is a great piece of work Reece! I especially liked the range of adverbs, keep it up!

  8. I loved the different adverbs well done !

Leave a Reply

Skip to toolbar