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The water poem

Some times small, some times large, it can flood towns, or make a puddle to splash in, an ocean to swim in, a pool to paddle in. There is water every were.

4 Responses to “The water poem”

  1. I like your poem Jacob! I think that you could set it out more like a poem next time. Well done!

  2. I think that this links with the weather at the moment. I liked your ending, maybe next time, you could set it out more like a poem. I enjoyed reading this poem. Well done!

  3. I loved the poem but could you make the words rhyme? (And set it out like a poem)

  4. I love this poem Jacob. As it really links to the floods some people have faced and are still facing today. Well done!!!!!

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