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My Diary Entry by Ursularlydd

 

 

I can’t believe what I have I have heard! Today, I met a young boy, he was the sweetest little boy in the world, he showed me round London, it was an appalling sight. There were tonnes of boys living on a roof, none of them were very well. What can I do to change this awful state? Then I had a eureka moment! I could set up a children’s home, it would help so much.

By the way, the little boy was called Jim Jarvis. If it wasn’t for poor Jim and his determination to save London, I wouldn’t have had my eureka moment, and all of those underimageprivilaged children would all die in misery. The thought of small children living on the streets, just makes me sick. I can’t think of a way to describe it, that is how bad I think it is. Jim told me that my children’s home will be very popular.

Ursula



5 Responses to “My Diary Entry by Ursularlydd”

  1. Brilliant! I like your choice of VCOP and how you thought about your work.

  2. Your adjectives are great I like the word appalling!

  3. its brilliant Ursula, I loved how you described Jim as a sweet, little boy!

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